That was fragmented alright. I felt like I was on a hiking trail with many switchbacks and then came to a multi forked intersection and the names of the trails on the signs didn't line up with the trails. You were my 393rd bedtime story.
Hello Colleen! Once again, thank you so much for taking the time to read my story. About your comment. It sounds like the story felt quite confusing or disorienting at times, is that right? Just wondering, did you read Fragments of a Fragmented Mind before or after this one?
That was fragmented alright. I felt like I was on a hiking trail with many switchbacks and then came to a multi forked intersection and the names of the trails on the signs didn't line up with the trails. You were my 393rd bedtime story.
Hello Colleen! Once again, thank you so much for taking the time to read my story. About your comment. It sounds like the story felt quite confusing or disorienting at times, is that right? Just wondering, did you read Fragments of a Fragmented Mind before or after this one?
Just this one. I'm sorry if it sounded like it was confusing to me...it felt like a mind which was fragmented. I think it was very well done. :)
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Thanks a lot Zarem! I'm still working on it.